Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Deleted Sentence

(Knocked out of Part II of my story "Bluebird.")

"Brent was like a survey of men's magazines: hair, cologne, suits, shirts, and ties; but nowhere to be seen a trace of an idea."

1 comment:

FDW said...

Nice nice relxive if not UNVIRTUAL literary synchronicty-- knocked out of the piece and bot an idea in Biffs head-- shows up on the Blog for to stir the absinthe minded!
Otherwise nice modernist twang.